Date: 2009-11-12 04:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shanejayell.livejournal.com
Looks interesting so far. It could use a bit more description, as so far I have no idea what her rocket looks like, the controld of the ship or even physical cues on the characters. Tho that may be a stylistic choice you've made....

(I saw your post about lack of readers. I sorta thought this was intended for 'friends only' or some such, or I'd have jumped in sooner.)
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