seawasp: (leela)
[personal profile] seawasp
I was musing on this wonderful movie this morning, when it occurred to me, suddenly, that the entire movie's main plot could be viewed as driven, not by Syndrome, but by the Machiavellian maneuverings of Edna Mode.

Consider:

1) Where did Syndrome get his costume? Yes, he COULD have made it himself, but if there was, in fact, a "costumer to the stars" for the Heroes, Syndrome would know. And as a would-be hero, he'd go to her. And he's exactly the sort of guy to peeve Edna enough to get her to make him one WITH a cape.

2) Edna's dissatisfaction with the Status Quo is clear. "I used to design for GODS!" She's annoyed in the extreme.

3) Edna is a perfectionist. She COULD have repaired Bob's suit well enough to be unnoticeable even under pretty close inspection.

(one of the most telling points)

4) Edna didn't tell Bob about the tracking beacon. Edna knew that Bob was sneaking around doing Hero stuff. Unless she had ulterior motives she had no reason NOT to tell Bob about the features in the suits. Instead, WITHOUT telling him, she went ahead and made the suits for the rest of the family.

5) She was clearly WAITING for Helen to call. She could have called her any time, but didn't.

In my theory, this is what happened:

Syndrome finds Edna; convinces her to make him a costume, but makes such a pill of himself that she deliberately makes it with a cape, hoping something will happen to him.

Shortly afterward, supers start disappearing. Edna knows a lot of them even in civilian identities, obviously. Eventually she makes the connection.

Edna is already utterly put out that her entire career was derailed by stupid lawsuits. She wants things back the way they were.

So when Mr. Incredible shows up, clearly the next target of Syndrome, she finally has the perfect setup to put her plan into action. She knows Bob married Helen. She knows -- none better -- that the two have been trying their best to stay "normal". She also knows that with Bob keeping it secret, there is one obvious deduction Helen might draw from Bob's sneaking around.

So she doesn't tell Bob about the beacon or Syndrome. She sews the repair Not Quite Perfect and waits for Helen to call. She leads Helen to figure out Bob's been out behind her back, lying to her about the "job", and then hands her the tracker, knowing the family will confront Syndrome -- almost certainly publicly -- and usher in a new era of the Supers. And give her back her proper place.

All that has transpired here has done so according to my fabulous design, dah-lings.

Date: 2006-03-15 01:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] groblek.livejournal.com
That hang together entirely too well - now I don't think I'll be able to watch the movie quite the same way again...

Date: 2006-03-15 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] filkerdave.livejournal.com
Oh my, that's brilliant.

May I link this?

Date: 2006-03-15 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ross-teneyck.livejournal.com
Hah!

I can definitely see Edna as the secret mastermind; but I think the plan as you've outlined it leaves way too much to chance and coincidence. Edna would do better than that.

What I wonder is if the Feds weren't quietly backing Syndrome in his ongoing effort to wipe out all the supers. The supers were expensive to keep in hiding, plus you never knew when they might take it into their heads to start being activist again; clearly they were much better gotten rid of... discreetly and with deniability, of course. It wouldn't have been hard for them to find out about Syndrome; you don't build a secret high-tech lair like that without leaving some kind of invoice trail.

Hmm. Maybe Mirage was the government agent in his organization. No real evidence for that, but it's an interesting possibility.

By the way, did David Brin ever post an essay describing how Syndrome was really the good guy, trying to make superpowers available to everyone and combating the evil elitists "superheroes" who thought they were better than everyone else because of their genes? Because I can't believe Brin would miss out on an opportunity to deconstruct popular entertainment in a contrarian way.

Date: 2006-03-15 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anton-p-nym.livejournal.com
That would slightly skip Syndrome's totally (to the point of sociopathy) self-serving reasons for building the super-gadgets.

As to Edna Mode, puppetmaster-diva, well... it was writer/director Brad Bird doing her voice... *grin*

-- Steve's a total raving fan for that flick.

Date: 2006-03-15 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ross-teneyck.livejournal.com
Well, I didn't say that Syndrome would know the government was abetting him in this scenario.

I'm thinking it was more like they were keeping an eye on him, and perhaps even discreetly helping him as long as all he was doing was killing supers. They doubtless had plans to take him down when he got done with the supers; but I suspect they were taken by surprise by his "giant robot attack" plan.

Date: 2006-03-15 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anton-p-nym.livejournal.com
Sorry, I was unclear there... that was directed at a possible Brin recasting of Syndrome as a misunderstood hero. Not that Brin isn't good enough a writer to make it work anyway, but it's a tough row to hoe.

-- Steve'd think that the government would want to keep a stable of "reliable" Supers on tap for future use, in case the Red Menace (or its equivalent in the Incrediverse) gets rambunctious.

I

Date: 2006-03-15 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shana.livejournal.com
It's obvious! Now that you explain it.

Edna is my idol. :)

Re: Doesn't quite work.

Date: 2006-03-15 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janetmiles.livejournal.com
my proof that Yoda was the bad guy in the Star Wars series.

Do you have a link to that, maybe?

Re: But of course.

Date: 2006-03-15 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] filkerdave.livejournal.com
*grins*

Done ;)

I may or may not see you at I-Con. Since I've got Lunacon the week before and FKO the week after, it's still iffy. But it's LOCAL...

Date: 2006-03-15 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] almeda.livejournal.com
There's an extra on the DVD that includes the line, delivered from Edna to Syndrome, "And for you, dahling ... a *cape*." With what we know to be menace on that last word.

Date: 2006-03-15 05:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] von-krag.livejournal.com
What the heck? Are you and Steve den Beste going to ret-con more? SDB BTW did a very good ret-con on the Matrix trilogy @ http://denbeste.nu/Chizumatic/tmw/TheMatrix.shtml

Date: 2006-03-15 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] folkmew.livejournal.com
Hee! I always KNEW it in my heart but it is good to see it spelled out so clearly! :-)

Date: 2006-03-15 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] folkmew.livejournal.com
Ooh! I don't remember that! WIll have to look for it now. :-)

Date: 2006-03-15 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guyelfkin.livejournal.com
Oooh! You are *so* right

Teddy

Date: 2006-03-15 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] almeda.livejournal.com
I THINK it was in the hero bios ...

Date: 2006-03-15 03:07 pm (UTC)
mneme: (Default)
From: [personal profile] mneme
I'm not sure -- given the way Edna manipulates the family, that some of this isn't -text-, actually.

Date: 2006-03-15 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tarkrai.livejournal.com
You know, Edna's rant when Helen gets all middle-aged-wifey makes SO much more sense now! SO much was dependent on Helen playing her role, and she was never a shrinking violet... and here she is in tears, with... with... SNOT! EWW!

She expected Helen to be angry that Bob was doing superstuff- it never occurred to her that another interpretation could be placed on Bob's extracurricular activity...

Date: 2006-03-15 03:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fireskin.livejournal.com
Of course she is the mind behind all their success. And did you know her voice is done by the writer and director of the film?... hmmmmmmmm....

Date: 2006-03-15 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jimtbari.livejournal.com
This is old news, I swear....

I don't remember if someone pointed this out to me or if I figured it out for myself, but I remember having this discussion (at the very least offline, with my wife) while the movie was still in theaters. (Note that "I remember" doesn't mean "this is what happened:" it's not a very clear memory).

Re: Doesn't quite work.

Date: 2006-03-15 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] llennhoff.livejournal.com
I remember that post vividly, and it is trivial to find via google groups if you just remember Could it be Yoda.

Re: Of COURSE I did, Dahling...

Date: 2006-03-15 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fireskin.livejournal.com
Now that would be fun!

Re: Of COURSE I did, Dahling...

Date: 2006-03-15 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ross-teneyck.livejournal.com
Well, that's certain. I don't recall that anybody uttered the magic words -- "There's no way he could have survived that!" -- which would absolutely guarantee that he would be back... but in this case I think the magic words were implicit.

As for other supers, you can always assert that (a) Syndrome missed some of the public supers; (b) there were an arbitrary number of covert supers that Syndrome never knew about; and/or (c) new supers have been born/had laboratory accidents/picked up oddly glowing mystical artifacts/been exposed to weird radiation/dedicated themselves to revenge on all criminals since the older generation went into hiding.

Date: 2006-03-16 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormydragon.livejournal.com
One big flaw with your theory:

It all hinges on Edna Mole designing all or most of the supers costumes, such that she was THE only logical choice for Syndrome to go to.

But the fact that some many of the supers wore capes suggests that most didn't go to her. There is at least one other designer out there who DOES like capes.

And considering this one or more designers seem to have designed for far more supers than Edna did, it now seems hard to say that Syndrome necessarily must have gotten his suit from her.

Date: 2006-03-17 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valancy17.livejournal.com
I think I love you.

Re: SHH!

Date: 2006-03-17 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valancy17.livejournal.com
and my husband has read this post now! so it's all good. *wink wink nudge nudge*

(just kidding)

Date: 2006-03-18 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celticdragonfly.livejournal.com
I didn't see it. Can you let me know if you find it, where to get it? Thanks much. I'd like to watch it.

Date: 2006-03-30 04:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prodigal.livejournal.com
Holy crap. That makes a terrifying amount of sense...

Date: 2006-03-30 05:23 pm (UTC)
thebitterguy: (Default)
From: [personal profile] thebitterguy
So was she also designing the outfits for all the other Supers Syndrome was using to test his robots on? In which case she's cold blooded, as well as Machiavellian.

Date: 2006-03-30 06:01 pm (UTC)
ext_5149: (Elf Boy)
From: [identity profile] mishalak.livejournal.com
If true that's funny because I wrote a fanfic with that (obvious line) in it a year and some ago.

Re: Of COURSE I did, Dahling...

Date: 2006-03-30 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarg.livejournal.com
Well, the thing is that if I want to use the lovely background info they supply, I have to reduce Syndrome's deathtoll, or 90% of those backgrounds are toast. We SEE them listed as terminated in the KRONOS files.

Sure, but maybe they faked their deaths. For some of them this might almost be reflexive.

"Hmm, some unknown villain is trying to kill me after all these years. I'll let him think he succeeded then lay low and see what happens next."

Re: Of COURSE I did, Dahling...

Date: 2006-03-30 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarg.livejournal.com
Gazerbeam, for instance, isn't merely dead, he's really most sincerely dead.

No question.

And you'd think that most of those Supers would've sounded the alarm rather shortly after escaping Syndrome's trap, if they managed it. Sure, go to ground for a while, but given Nomanisan Island as the killing ground, you'd think it'd be pretty obvious that you weren't the ONLY candidate. A few might not care, but most of them would react the same way Mr. Incredible did at the idea of some psycho killing off Supers.

This is a problem even without faked deaths. I don't remember which version of the Evil Killing Machine was finally sent out against Mr. Incredible, but all the previous versions had gone against another super and lost. In no instance, as far as we know (and barring some sort of government cover-up) was any sort of alarm sounded.

Re: Yes.

Date: 2006-03-30 10:21 pm (UTC)
thebitterguy: (Default)
From: [personal profile] thebitterguy
Man, I'm glad I didn't see that version of the movie.

Re: Of COURSE I did, Dahling...

Date: 2006-03-31 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cmdr-zoom.livejournal.com
Well, since the Incredibles (that is, the Parr family) are a pretty clear FF homage (right down to the Mole Man at the end), I suppose you'd have others from the same era showing up: the Spidey-analogue, the Hulk-analogue, the Not-The-X-Men...

The Golden Age is dead, long live the Silver Age.

Date: 2006-03-31 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cmdr-zoom.livejournal.com
Meh.

I'm sorry, Wasp, but meh.

Once again, you've taken something that was good and simple and fun (and meant to be that way by the creator, IMO) and added another layer of complication... why? To show everyone how clever you are by twisting the facts to support an entirely different conclusion? Because complexity itself is beautiful (fractals, nebulae, microscopic vistas), and therefore More Complexity is Always Good? Because you proceed from the assumption that people are manipulative and dishonest?

I'm not buying it, just like I didn't buy your last pet theory. Lucas may have stumbled as a storyteller, but I think it's pretty clear what story he was trying to tell. Same here with Bird.

Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar.

Date: 2006-04-09 10:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spectre-eric.livejournal.com
I am also interested in this... I did not see Syndrome in the bios section on Disc 2...

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